cfeng

[aleathiel]

Right, I now want to officially introduce you all to cfeng, my RL friend who recently suffered experienced a miraculous two week conversion.

You can read his first piece here.

I believe it might be the first piece of fiction he's written in a long time (correct me if I'm wrong) so be gentle. Except actually he'd probably prefer you to be brutally honest.

Comments

[cfeng.livejournal.com]

First piece of fiction I've written in 5 years, and that piece only because I had to for exams. Before that, can't remember.

And brutally honest, please.

[azriona.livejournal.com]

Oh, I will be. But I have to leave for work in ten minutes, and ten minutes doesn't give me time for brutal honesty.

(Although I did skim through it quickly, and other than a distinct lack of dialogue and rather lengthy paragraphs, I liked it.)

[cfeng.livejournal.com]

thanks. good to know it passes muster at first glance. didn't dare tackle dialogue - it was hard enough including what i did. lengthy paragraphs, well just tough luck.

[azriona.livejournal.com]

Ah, well, that's just me and my hearty dislike of lengthy paragraphs with lengthy exposition. And I'm probably over-fond of dialogue myself, being in theater ...