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Strangers, part V
With thanks to my wonderful beta [livejournal.com profile] olivia_ramirez


Earlier parts here


Part V

Orlando isn’t sure how long he’s been standing motionless. It’s completely ridiculous really, but he has no urge to laugh. His hands are submerged in soapy, fatty water and out through the window in front of him he can see the grey of London rain. Some inconsequential pop-tune is playing aimlessly on the radio and even if he were to try he’ll never remember it later. His bare feet are cold on the wooden floor. All the little things flood his brain as time stops and some part of him just blankly refuses to acknowledge the obvious.

Viggo is pressed against his back, and Viggo is as hard as Orlando.

Viggo’s hands drop from Orlando’s bare chest and rest lightly on his hips as if asking a question. Orlando involuntarily arches his back and presses against his friend. It’s the weirdest sensation. That’s another guy’s cock he can feel. And yet it doesn’t feel repulsive.

Not at all.

There is no signal between them, no reply to Viggo’s unspoken question, but they melt into fluid movement, Orlando turning , his soapy-wet hands grabbing at the belt loops of Viggo’s jeans, his face pressing against the crook of Viggo’s neck as Viggo’s hands slide around to pull him closer. Orlando can hear Viggo’s breathing getting harsher as they strain against one another and he feels his own heart rate increase.

Part of him is distant, is watching unbelieving from somewhere across the room. But no part of him criticises, no part of him is disgusted. No part of him is capable of much thought beyond acknowledgement and realisation.

Viggo backs up against the table and Orlando scrabbles up into his lap, trying not to let their groins break contact. Viggo is making soft whimpering noises now, his hips moving with jagged thrusts at counterpoint to Orlando’s. The gentle movement has become harsh and needy, faster and rougher, but it’s not fast enough or hard enough and the seam of his jeans is in just the wrong place, the denim too thick, but stopping to undo it would mean stopping and that just isn’t going to happen...

Then the urgency is gone, his balls tighten and warm pleasure shoots through him and he is limp in Viggo’s arms and unable to think anything except how strange this morning is becoming. With a noise of frustration, Viggo thrusts against his languid body a few times before stopping with a wrenched sigh. Viggo lies back on the kitchen table, Orlando still in his arms, their bodies still moving gently against one another.

“This is all wrong,” Viggo breathes and Orlando stops breathing, heart still racing.

He tries to pull away but Viggo’s strong grasp prevents it. “It should have been naked and in bed and on a day when I didn’t have to leave for the airport in seven hours,” Viggo murmurs. “And in an ideal world I would be twenty years younger.”

Suddenly his earlier comment makes sense and Orlando feels incredibly stupid that he didn’t see this coming. Viggo obviously knows him better than he knows himself.

*

Almost a week later Orlando receives an envelope with an American postmark. He’d recognise Viggo’s handwriting with his eyes shut he thinks humourlessly and props the envelope up on the kitchen table before resting his chin level with it on the smooth surface.

I’ve sent you a little something. Viggo had said on the phone. The thing I saw that changed everything .

Gingerly Orlando opens the envelope. It’s a black and white photograph, and at first Orlando can’t work out what it is, then the shapes become less of a blur of grey as his eyes connect up light and shadow. It’s taken from a weird angle, but that’s not unusual for Viggo. It’s his mouth, open in sleep, pressed against the pale skin of Viggo’s shoulder. His eyes, shut, buried against one arm. It’s his hand, reaching, grasping for Viggo’s.

Instinct Viggo has written on the border. And underneath, No longer strangers .


Date: 2004-02-06 07:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] kinseymill.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous. And the last lines..aaaaaw! *melts*

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Date: 2004-02-06 08:52 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2004-02-06 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] k-leale.livejournal.com
Ohhh, this is a lovely story and I'm glad I only found it on the last part, so I didn't have to wait for any of it! (Instant gratification, y'know.) Sweet and hot and darn Viggo, get yourself back to London already! If there was to be a sequel, I would absolutely want to read it. Thank you for sharing this!

(The sale at Harrod's was cute, too. It's nice to think he still has a few very un-star-like roots.) :)

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Date: 2004-02-06 08:54 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

The sale at Harrods actually came from a comment of Orlando somewhere at the end of an interview (I have no idea which one!) where he said he was off to see what he could get for his apartment in the Harrods' sale. So I can take no credit - the sweetness belongs to the real boy!

Date: 2004-02-06 08:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aman0n.livejournal.com
It’s his mouth, open in sleep, pressed against the pale skin of Viggo’s shoulder. His eyes, shut, buried against one arm. It’s his hand, reaching, grasping for Viggo’s.

I love that. It sounds so...intimate.

You wouldn't happen to have copy of that photo?

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Date: 2004-02-06 08:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
You wouldn't happen to have copy of that photo?

I wish I did.

Not sure I'd share it though!!

Date: 2004-02-06 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leynamoore.livejournal.com
That's the end?.....*whimpers*

I loved this.

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Date: 2004-02-06 08:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I'm happy you loved it!

Date: 2004-02-06 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syndarys.livejournal.com
I read parts 1-3 at college today (when I was supposed to be working on databases, but dude... RPS vs. Databases? No fucking contest!), and I've only just managed to sit down to read the rest... I have to say that this fic was so beautiful...!! I'm glad I read it all in one go, though - I hate having to wait for more! ;)

The imagery was perfect; I can literally see the things you describe perfectly - like little snapshots in my mind. Very beautiful... it's got an almost poetic rhythm to it...

Mmm... I'm getting analytical, and I hate it when I look into stories too much, so I'm gonna stop there :) But yeah... have you written any other fics I could browse at my leisure? :)

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Date: 2004-02-06 02:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I'm glad to hear I rated higher than databases! And I'm also glad you liked my style.

I've not written much in this fandom, to be honest. Lots of short bit and pieces which are in this LJ - I can point you more specifically if you like. This at Christmas, is probably my favourite.

Most of my stuff is a year or so old and in the Harry Potter fandom. I can certainly point you in that direction if you're interested, although I've 'graduated', you might say, to LOTR and RPS since then.

I've just started two more multipart fics, one Ara/Boro/Fara and one multi-pairing RPS, but neither are posted yet.

I hope that's some help, and thank you again for your wonderful comments.

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Date: 2004-02-06 02:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I'm sorry, I've just realised who I'm talking to! 'Do you like HP?' Duh!? Most of www.astronomytower.org/authorLinks/Aleathiel/>my stuff is here, although only some of it is slash. (Yes, *hangs head in shame* I wrote het!)

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Date: 2004-02-06 02:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I'm doing well tonight! Can you tell I'm not entirely sober!?

Try again

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Date: 2004-02-06 03:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Fuck. Here
If that doesn't work I'll do it in the morning!

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Date: 2004-02-07 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syndarys.livejournal.com
LOL, definitely having trouble last night! Thanks for the link, I've got it...! :) I'll have a read through as soon as I can! :D *does the happy fanfic dance*

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Date: 2004-02-07 04:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*grin* I apologise for my incoherence last night! I shouldn't try to reply to messages while inebriated!! I'm glad you made some kind of sense of it.

Date: 2004-02-06 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poisondreams.livejournal.com
Okay you changed your icon and threw me off!! no fair *winks*

Love this story, just didn't see it at first.

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Date: 2004-02-06 02:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Sorry! I should have posted the last chapter with the other icon so that didn't happen!
I thought it was about time I had an RPS icon, much as I love my HP one, and so Fin made me this. It was time for a change.

Date: 2004-02-06 03:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] abluegirl.livejournal.com
Mmmmm... loved it. I notice that this is the final part, but i can't help but want for more. :D

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Date: 2004-02-07 12:46 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thank you! For now the story is told, while I write other things. But I love it too, so might come back to it.

Date: 2004-02-06 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaosmanor.livejournal.com
That was beautiful.

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Date: 2004-02-07 12:47 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Coming from you, that means a lot!

Date: 2004-02-06 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lennongirl.livejournal.com
*sighs*
So I finally found the time to finish this one after urging you to write more for so long. But well...finish...it's over? Oh no...:(
I loved it. The whole story intruiged me from the start, it was a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Date: 2004-02-07 12:48 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I also love that icon!

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Date: 2004-02-07 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lennongirl.livejournal.com
You're very welcome. And thank you as well. I just found these gorgeous pics of Viggo last night and couldn't decide which one to use for an icon, so I just took them all :)

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Date: 2004-02-07 05:40 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
I want to study Viggology. Do you know anywhere that offers the course?

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Date: 2004-02-07 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lennongirl.livejournal.com
I'm working on it to make it a serious subject. Will let you know when you can start to enroll for classes :)

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Date: 2004-02-07 09:02 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Great stuff! How about we volunteer to teach it?

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Date: 2004-02-07 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lennongirl.livejournal.com
*big grin*
Count me in;)

Date: 2004-02-06 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pseudonihilist.livejournal.com
This was wonderful. Gentle. Really, really hot.

but they melt into fluid movement

made me melt too. i loved the way you described the way they touched each other...the words themselves became tactile. And the ending...

thank you. lovely, lovely fic, from start to finish.

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Date: 2004-02-07 12:48 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
And thank you for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2004-02-06 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cynical-terror.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed the end to this. This is definately one of the best Viggorli's I've read.

Very impressed!

No cliches here, captain.

<3

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Date: 2004-02-07 12:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
:) Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I did try to make it different.

Date: 2004-02-08 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-legion2012.livejournal.com
ooooohh! {faints}

Instinct Viggo has written on the border. And underneath, No longer strangers.

where did everybody go? man, this was awesome! so sweet and the characters are so consistent and likable. wow. gah. swee...{rereads last paragraph and sentence. faints again.}

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Date: 2004-02-08 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-legion2012.livejournal.com
btw, mind if i friend you when i wake up? cheers.

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Date: 2004-02-08 07:47 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Of course I don't mind, and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!
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