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A shorter, smuttier Merlin/Arthur/Lancelot fic. NC17
Written really fast, sorry for any errors, will correct them as/if I find them.



It wasn’t how Arthur had planned to spend his afternoon, but he couldn’t think of anywhere he would rather be.

Merlin’s knees were planted firmly against his hips, Merlin’s long, pale, body curving up in an arch across him, Merlin’s hot face pressed against his neck as he gasped and moaned in Arthur’s ear. Behind and above, past Merlin’s shoulder, Arthur could see Lancelot, his dark hair curling with sweat, his eyes closed in bliss as he slid in and out of Merlin.

They were heavy and the movement of their bodies meeting pressed ever downwards, forcing Arthur into the mattress, Merlin’s slick cock was sliding against his stomach and skittering against his own erection. Arthur didn’t think he’d ever been as hard in his whole life. He could taste Merlin the boy was pressed so close against him, his hot, damp skin sticking to Arthur’s in places, the musky smell of his arousal filling the air. His dark hair was mussed, sticking out in all directions, getting in Arthur’s face, in his mouth. He pressed urgent, open-mouthed kisses to Merlin’s face, to his forehead, his cheeks. They no longer had enough co-ordination to make their lips meet.

Arthur’s fingers dug into Merlin’s waist and he could feel Lancelot’s hips banging against his knuckles with each thrust, could feel the way Merlin moved beneath the other man, his deep moans of want making his whole body shake. Then Merlin was biting his shoulder and the sharp pain thrummed through Arthur, making him arch up harder against his servant, seeking friction against his stomach, his cock. Merlin was frozen still for a moment, not even breathing, then Arthur felt his cock twitch and his arms shake and Merlin was coming all over him, collapsing down against him in a shuddering heap.

Lancelot must have withdrawn, because he rolled over onto his side, running his broad hands down Merlin’s back soothingly where he lay in Arthur’s arms. When Arthur turned his head, Lancelot's face was very close, and then Lancelot’s mouth was on his, his tongue in his mouth and Arthur knew he was rutting helplessly against Merlin’s exhausted, slick body. Merlin barely protested, just snuggled closer, wrapping his arms around Arthur.

There was a hard cock pressing into his side and Arthur realised Lancelot hadn’t come either. He moved one of his hands from where it had been caressing Merlin, and closed his fingers around Lancelot. It was an awkward angle, but the gasping sound of encouragement Lancelot moaned into his mouth made it all worthwhile.

“Roll him over,” Lancelot murmured, and it took a moment for Arthur to understand, to shift Merlin’s weight onto the mattress, disentangling their sticky bodies. Merlin moaned a brief protest, and Arthur calmed him with kisses.

Merlin’s eyes fluttered open and he smiled at Arthur, reaching out to touch his shoulder, then his chest, He looked down at the mess he’d made of Arthur’s stomach, and at Arthur’s cock, still jutting proudly out. Merlin grinned. “That was good,” he affirmed. Then a twinkle of mischief danced into his eyes. “You should get Lancelot to do the same to you.”

Arthur laughed, although his mouth was dry. “What, fuck me on top of you?”

Merlin raised his head so that he could see Lancelot lying on the other side of Arthur’s body. “No,” he said, and his words were addressed to them both. “Fuck him like this, so that I can see.”

Arthur felt firm hands behind him, encouraging him to bend his leg up at the knee, and warm hands in front of him, stroking through the damp hair on his stomach, wrapping around his cock and reaching down to touch his balls.

Then Merlin kissed him, breathing love and desire into him, and no, this wasn’t how Arthur had intended to spend his afternoon, but there was no better way in the world.
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Date: 2008-10-19 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] x-merlin.livejournal.com
Hot. *fans self* :)

Date: 2008-10-19 03:22 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-19 03:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] janne-d.livejournal.com
Guh.

*is ded from hot*

Date: 2008-10-19 03:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
That's a reaction I like!

Date: 2008-10-19 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draykonis.livejournal.com
Phwoar, definitely a good way to spend an afternoon, I'm sure!

Date: 2008-10-19 03:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe. I think so too.

Date: 2008-10-19 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] harknessgirl.livejournal.com
Bloody hell *runs away to have a cold shower*
Thanks for sharing xx

Date: 2008-10-19 03:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it :P

Date: 2008-10-19 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fortassetu.livejournal.com
*Why* are my afternoons not like this?

*glares at clock*

Oh, man, that last sentance would have been so much better if there was someone else here..

Oh, I loved that, by the way. Thank you for writing it!

Date: 2008-10-19 03:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, much as I wish it was, it's not how I spent my afternoon either!

I'm glad you liked it. I fancied writing a bit of smut.

Date: 2008-10-19 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rawthorne.livejournal.com
Two hot fics in one day? You spoil us!

Date: 2008-10-19 03:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Yeah, you can tell I'm supposed to be studying! :P

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Date: 2008-10-19 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_profiterole_/
Woohoo! Now that's an afternoon! \o/

Date: 2008-10-19 04:05 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-19 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-fallen-sister.livejournal.com
Wow, that was exceedingly hot! I don't read a lot of threesome fics, but this one really worked for me -- just the right amount of each character, and I liked the way the interaction between Arthur and Merlin was more intimate and personal.

And nice icon! Vig/Orli = ♥

Date: 2008-10-20 07:48 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
:) Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it.

And Viggo icons are appropriate today :P

Date: 2008-10-19 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catclaw.livejournal.com
Wow.

There are no words.

*Lights up a cigarette*

Date: 2008-10-20 07:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*g* I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2008-10-19 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunbladegirl.livejournal.com
Love it, very hot.

Date: 2008-10-20 07:49 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-19 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joymaro.livejournal.com
*dribbles out of chair*

*one hand reaches up to type*

sklhjsjdfhadsjfha;sldfkj

Date: 2008-10-20 07:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, that's the kind of reaction I like.

Date: 2008-10-19 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damson.livejournal.com
Ngrrr. *fans self* Holy moly, that's some way to spend an afternoon.

No wonder Arthur looked so disappointed when Lancelot left to 'find himself'. ;)

Date: 2008-10-20 07:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Yeah, poor Arthur. He's going to miss Lancelot a lot!

Date: 2008-10-19 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taigrin.livejournal.com
woho!!!!!

Date: 2008-10-20 07:50 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-10-19 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] little-gnome-87.livejournal.com
phwaa ... loved it :D xXx

Date: 2008-10-20 07:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad to hear it.

Date: 2008-10-20 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angiepen.livejournal.com
Nice one, hon Good to see the boys are still getting along. :D

Angie

Date: 2008-10-20 07:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Yeah, they do seem to be...

Date: 2008-10-20 02:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
*fans self* Very hot!

Date: 2008-10-20 07:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*g* Thanks.

Date: 2008-10-20 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prelusion.livejournal.com
Yum.
The potential for threesome fics made me love 1x05 as much as I did.

The last one had, you know, plot and purpose. This one just has porn.
That's ok. I prefer my porn untainted by plots =P

Date: 2008-10-20 07:51 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe. I usually like to have a healthy dose of both, but sometimes a bit of porn on its own is fun!

Date: 2008-10-20 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drjenny88.livejournal.com
Oh, that was so hot and so good and... words fail me.

Keep writing :)

Date: 2008-10-20 10:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, oh don't worry I will! I have a couple more short ideas and then I'm tempted to write something bigger and juicier and longer. It might be about time for that.

Date: 2008-10-20 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] counselor69.livejournal.com
Wow! Absolutely hot!

Date: 2008-10-20 10:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*g* I'm glad you think so.

Date: 2008-10-20 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yami-tai.livejournal.com
Veeeery nice *fans self*!

Date: 2008-10-20 10:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*lends you fan*

Glad you liked it.

Date: 2008-10-20 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamestone.livejournal.com
HOT LIKE THE SAHARA AT LUNCHTIME.

Phew.

And can't they spend every afternoon like this? Please?

I love the repetition of Merlin's name in the first section, that was wicked :D

*opens window and fans self*

Date: 2008-10-20 10:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, thanks.

And also thanks for telling me a specific that you liked. I find it helpful to discover which bits people think work.

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Date: 2008-10-20 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anime-fangirl-3.livejournal.com
Wow... I mean, just... Wow....


*iz ded*

Date: 2008-10-20 10:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
*revives you*

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-10-21 11:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] busarewski.livejournal.com
Oh my, those dear boys sure knows how to spend an afternoon! Very hot indeed.

Date: 2008-10-22 08:04 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-10-26 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caiyene.livejournal.com
Woah boy, that was hot and very good. Too short though ;-)

I'm clearly not the only one who thought those three were a good idea ;-)

Date: 2008-10-26 08:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Hehe, I might well be tempted to write a longer version.

And no, you weren't the only one! :P

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Date: 2008-10-27 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aeroport_art.livejournal.com
Woohoo, I've finally found my first Merlin fic to mem! Figures it'd be a porny one-shot, huh? :0

Date: 2008-10-27 10:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
;) I'm glad you liked it!
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