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I had a few moments to write and I got stuck on the two fics I'm working on (pt 2 of Squiggles and the next KOH) so I wrote this for Razzle who wanted Orlando/Keira.

Stolen Moments
R
250 words


The water droplets from her hands shone in the air like laughter and she stuck her tongue out at him, dancing backwards, the sun making her skin apricot and copper.

The sand was warm under his bare legs and he was too comfortable to get up, to chase. He let her flutter tantalisingly close, reaching out lazily, looking at the blue of the sky through the fingers that cast shadows on his face.

Eventually she’d get tired and come back, she’d settle, long limbs and loose hair, across his lap and let him kiss her, let him run his hands up her sun warmed back and flick open that vibrantly coloured bikini top and pull it off her, sucking her darkened nipples into his mouth. She’d curl her thighs around his waist, rocking downwards until he’d be able to feel her heat through the two thin layers of wet fabric. Then perhaps he’d roll her into the sand, or lie back and let her peel away his wet trunks. Perhaps he’d just touch her until she came, gasping his name and shuddering the way she had when he’d taken her on the floor of Johnny’s yacht, the director just ten feet away the other side of a door.

Perhaps they’d tell people, perhaps it would become a proper relationship. Or maybe it would remain these stolen moments. She bit her lip as she left the waves, the sand coating her wet ankles as she approached him. He’d think another time.

Date: 2004-11-15 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] undrockroll.livejournal.com
oh that was so lovely, wow <3 really :) I love Orlando/Keira

Date: 2004-11-16 06:20 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thanks. I was surprisingly pleased with the pairing - you will probably see more of it.

Date: 2004-11-15 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirtysidekick.livejournal.com
so nice sweet and vivid!

Date: 2004-11-16 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirtysidekick.livejournal.com
welcome my sweet!

Date: 2004-11-15 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nikkidarling.livejournal.com
Gorgeous. I want moreeee XD

Date: 2004-11-16 06:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thanks. There will probably be more of this pairing because I liked writing it.

Date: 2004-11-16 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nikkidarling.livejournal.com
:D So glad. Huge OrliKeira fan.

Date: 2004-11-15 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvensorceress.livejournal.com
That was just lovely, hon.

Sweet and sexy and *purrs*

<3<3

Date: 2004-11-16 06:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2004-11-16 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com
Oh, I really, REALLY love you.
Bloody perfect.

Date: 2004-11-16 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com
Incidentally, that's really not enough praise for the amount I LOVE YOU but I can't put it into words. I shall just have to marry you instead.

Date: 2004-11-16 03:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
Okay, I accept. Can I have a really pretty dress?

Date: 2004-11-16 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com
certainly. You may dance in purty taffetta.
Or you know, WHATEVER YOU WANT COS OMG

Date: 2004-11-16 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ios-pillow-book.livejournal.com
That was so summer-ly and overall lovely, especially these lines:

The water droplets from her hands shone in the air like laughter and she stuck her tongue out at him, dancing backwards, the sun making her skin apricot and copper.

Perfect ficlet for a grey November day!

Date: 2004-11-16 09:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com
:) I'm glad you liked it. And yes, my grey day needed brightening with some sexy almost pirates sunshine.

Date: 2004-11-18 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-mixer.livejournal.com
Yum! Very sexy.

Date: 2004-11-19 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain-molly.livejournal.com
Ooooh, very nice. It's sexy in a warm sunny way. GREAT job!

Excellent!

Date: 2005-06-22 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blowers-daughtr.livejournal.com
I'm usually not a fan of Keira/Orlando pairings (personally because I prefer her paired with women) but this story was great! I loved it, and wish it was longer!

That was

Date: 2005-10-12 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaysar.livejournal.com
Simply amazing!

You might want to share your story with Orlando/Keira diehards (lots more fiction here) bloomnknightley.proboards25.com

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