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aleathiel ([personal profile] aleathiel) wrote2004-05-18 10:51 am

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Sunlight
100 words. Eric or Viggo.


He envies the sunlight because it makes Orlando smile as he goes outside. He envies the sunlight its freedom to touch, to caress those cheekbones and highlight the curls in that dark hair.

He envies the way the sunlight can make Orlando crinkle his eyes adorably, and the fact it makes him strip off his shirt, the rays that finger Orlando’s bare torso, that cast tiny shadows from his nipples and the collection of trinkets hanging round his neck.

But on the rainy day when Orlando kisses him, he pities the sunlight its lack of ability to feel this joy.

[identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting.
Not only is that completely gorgeous, it helped me realise something. I read it, I wondered who was saying it and I could only picture Viggo.
My OTP endures, in my own mind if nowhere else.

Thank you, honey.
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[identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
I guess it's a kind of Viggo train of thought.

My OTP endures, in my own mind if nowhere else
And in mine. Viggorli slash tomorrow, since there's a chapter waiting to be finished.

[identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
*dances in celebration*

[identity profile] finduilas-clln.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
God, that's beautiful. *re-reads* *loves*
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[identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. The sun came out this morning and inspired me.

[identity profile] dd2-edge.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
Very effective.

*kicks self*

Beautiful~

And you've made good use of the sun element:)

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[identity profile] aleathiel.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 07:34 am (UTC)(link)
*g* thanks. I thought about trying to tie in the tattoo, but it wouldnt work.

[identity profile] deathskiss.livejournal.com 2004-05-18 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh- that was beautiful! It's been rainy and gloomy here the last couple of days, but the sun came out just as I was reading this; perfect timing!