ext_153109 ([identity profile] cfeng.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aleathiel 2004-03-24 05:34 am (UTC)

thanks. good to know it passes muster at first glance. didn't dare tackle dialogue - it was hard enough including what i did. lengthy paragraphs, well just tough luck.
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