ext_153177 ([identity profile] hidden-wolf.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aleathiel 2004-03-19 03:37 am (UTC)

Gods,Paris' death is so dramatic,first beginning vaguely in the first paragraph and ending in the last,Hector's goodbye (the fierce resolution in his eyes as they kissed farewell)and Paris' anguish.I figured that Pat's and Achilles' deaths lacked of such emotion,but it's logical since it was Hector/Paris-centric.
Loved the similes,too ^^

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