i almost never read wip's because i've been burned a few times by authors who lose interest and stop writing. but i was lurking in the viggorlean memories and skimmed the first story and got hooked. and now i'm pretty much panting for the rest of the story.

i enjoyed your writing, simple but beautifully detailed, the way you set the scene and describe the action. and the chemistry between the two is spot on, the tiny bit of tension and uncertainty stirred into the old friendship.

excellent read. thanks for writing and sharing.