You could definitely do some things with that story-skeleton. [nodnod] I love this part, though:
On landing in Wales at Aber Alaw in Anglesey Branwen died of grief that so much destruction had been caused on her account, crying "Oh Son of God, woe to me that I was born! Two fair islands have been laid waste because of me!"
Is it typical or what that the central female character is shown expressing such remorse over all this death and devastation, which is clearly her fault [eyeroll] and ends up dying of it, doubtless the only way she could possibly have redeemed herself for this wickedness she'd "done." When in actuality she was just a pawn handed around by a bunch of whack-job men who were the cause of all the violence. [facepalm]
And don't mention dentists. :P I really need to go soon but I hate going.... [hides under the bed]
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Date: 2007-10-27 10:35 am (UTC)On landing in Wales at Aber Alaw in Anglesey Branwen died of grief that so much destruction had been caused on her account, crying "Oh Son of God, woe to me that I was born! Two fair islands have been laid waste because of me!"
Is it typical or what that the central female character is shown expressing such remorse over all this death and devastation, which is clearly her fault [eyeroll] and ends up dying of it, doubtless the only way she could possibly have redeemed herself for this wickedness she'd "done." When in actuality she was just a pawn handed around by a bunch of whack-job men who were the cause of all the violence. [facepalm]
And don't mention dentists. :P I really need to go soon but I hate going.... [hides under the bed]
Angie